NOTES
Feedback
This
criteria sheet doubles as a feedback sheet. Your essay will be returned
to you with a completed copy of this sheet attached to it.
Abbreviations
used in marginal comments
The
marginal comments on your essay may contain any of the following
abbreviations. Look up these sources for a more detailed comment
on the particular point in question.
The criteria
Principal
text: To fulfill this criterion, you must show some familiarity
with the set passage, and a knowledge of what's going on in it on
the level of narrative and character.
Analysis:
Do more with the passage than describe or paraphrase it: tell me
something about what its effects are and, above all, how it produces
them.
Argument:
This is the next stage up: what you get when you connect your observations,
insights and analyses. On the small-scale level, your sentences
and paragraphs should follow on from one another, rather than repeat
the same information or pile it together without apparent connections.
On the larger scale, the whole essay should clearly have a direction
to it, with later material building on the earlier. Your argument
should draw on your analyses, framing them and giving them direction.
Style and
expression: Clarity is all important, as are grammar, syntax,
and your ability to write in the genre of the academic essay. In
marking the essays, I shall be assuming you are thoroughly familiar
with the ENGL2035 essay Key, which, among
other things, has comments on and guidance to a number of the most
frequent stylistic problems encountered in essays in this course.
The EMSAH Grammar
and Punctuation Guide may also be useful as a reference.
Each of these
criteria can have flow-on effects on the others. A thorough and
inventive analysis may have all sorts of implications for the argument
you make. A good use of sources will suggest aspects for analysis
or points to explore in your argument. A clear style can show your
abilities to analyse and construct an argument in their best light.
All of these are directly aspects of your take on the topic, and
come from your knowledge of the principal texts.
Documentation:
As
the Assessment sheet suggests,
in a second-level course such as this one, you are expected to be
thoroughly familiar with scholarly conventions of documentation
and referencing. EMSAH uses MLA documentation, as set out in the
EMSAH Style
Guide. Not using it can result in a loss of percentage points,
as set out above. These penalty points are, however, redeemable
in the research assignment, as part of a bonus scheme. In other
words, get the documentation wrong in the short assignment but right
in the research assignment, and you'll claim back points you originally
lost.
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